Thread: Please review new comic site!

Here is the link: icymoonmeadows.the-comic.org

Story: The account of IMM, one of Granum's moons. The story revolves around Boyce, a kid trying to make sense of his rapidly freezing (and small) world. As if this was not bad enough, he is drawn into utter confusion as his entire world (literally) enters complete chaos.

Please let me know what you think of it!

I was told color would help, which I will probally do in the next book, if the story goes on.

Can we "bump" our posts?

Make the pictures colorful and also change the background to something more attractive and contrast to the comic. Increase the text size in the speech balloon. Your website address is too long, if possible you must trim it to something which is easier to remember.

Okay, thanks! I noticed that the text was small in the last imade